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the birthday gift: a story

it was her birthday and he had bought her nothing.

nikhil kadan swore under his breath. then realising he was alone, he swore again, this time the four letter word was clearly audible, it carried all his ire, it practically struck and reverberated against the square glass ashtray lying on the desk. he scrunched his brow thereafter and pursed his lips. because the problem remained. he hadn’t bought her anything and it was quite late in the evening, there was no time to rush down somewhere and get her a gift.

how could he have forgotten? maybe there was something right here in his office she might like? the furrows on his forehead deepened. but what did maya like? he realised, he hadn’t a clue. as he cogitated furiously, his eyes scanned his office looking for something he could give her, it didn’t occur to him even for a second that he may not find anything appropriate in his cluttered office tucked away in a corner of the interpol building.

the walls were covered with charts and the long white board. on his desk sat his laptop amid papers and stationery, on one side there was a table lamp, near its base lay his revolver, still loaded. the desk aside, there were heaps of files deposited on shelves; the entire notion that once you were electronically connected it would make way for a paperless office an obvious fantasy. beside, certain things just could not be filed away in computers. nikhil had come across enough hackers by now to know nothing really was safe out there, encrypted in cyberspace. good old fashioned cardboard and paper files kept in a safe close by was still the best way to keep secrets, secret.

he sighed and shook his head slightly, his spare lithe frame remained tense. it was evident there was nothing here for maya.

maya.

as her name made contact with his mind the second time, it sort of settled down and unknown to himself, his facial muscles relaxed, his eyes twinkled… maya. it had been so long.

seven whole days, in fact. seven days of a crazy whirl, wrenched away from life as usual.

nikhil’s eyes closed at last letting the weariness in. there’d been a tip off. heroin, crack, a large batch of souped up ecstasy were on their way to singapore, it was being smuggled from somewhere in borneo, most likely in a nondescript looking fishing boat. he had quit accompanying the guys on search operations, but this time round he decided to go along. he sensed he needed to. ever since the casinos had opened on the island, there had definitely been a change in the attitude of traffickers. expected. high rollers and flamboyant players were great customers, worth taking risks for. trafficking of all sorts had increased. he wanted to see things for himself.

and so it had been a week of huddling in crammed boats and kelongs, eating whatever was handy, barely sleeping. they had got the fellow. he was not in a fishing boat, the tip off was a smokescreen. also expected. a long flashy highly visible yacht instead carried the contraband. a group of rich kids, from indonesia, malaysia, the us, and singapore were on board. they had no idea of course what a good friend of theirs had packed in his suitcase.

nikhil sniggered, a corner of his finely chiseled lips lifting. perhaps having too much money made you stupid. “stoopid!” he muttered under his breath. then his eyes grew gentle almost. maya always laughed when he said that. “stew-pid!” she’d say correcting him. her large hazel irises would glint, she knew he’d repeat the word his way. nikhil began to smile, his dark brown eyes sparkling, growing darker, the tension starting to ease. “left over delhi accent lah” she called it, he’d moved to singapore with his parents when he was nine, there were a few words maybe he had carried from his early years, who knew. maya though was absolutely sure. how smug she looked when she said that. especially when she added that “lah”, the singapore touch.

he sat on the leather upholstered chair and rested his head against the back. he wished he could call her right now and say, “baby, come over…”

he had got back only a couple of hours before; he’d rushed home, changed, there had been no time to shave, just a quick shower, his boss wanted some papers and he had to go to maya’s birthday party. he hated parties.

of course, his suit was not ironed and his white linen shirt had wrinkles. well, at least it was clean, christina had come in while he was away and attended to the clothes. bless christina, his weekly cleaning lady. she disliked ironing but she never forgot to cook some food for her forgetful single boss, she also never missed a chance to lecture him on the harmful effects of cup noodles and oily hawker food. cooking was not part of christina’s duties, she pretended ironing wasn’t.

he’d driven over to the office to pick up the papers, he’d drop them off on the way to maya’s… that’s when it had hit him. maya’s birthday. gift?

nikhil grimaced. there was nothing he could do. unless 7-11 had something maya would love to have. what would maya really love to have though? he knew she liked her second toe to be held and playfully yanked. she sighed when he stroked the soles of her feet. he had noticed she’d suddenly stop talking when he kissed her lightly on her ears or pressed his lips to the back of her stunning long neck. she loved to talk. even when she was silent, something about her always spoke. or so it seemed to him.

she also liked to sit on his lap and watch extremely bad films. well, naturally she was convinced they were wonderful movies, and there really was no point in arguing with her. he slept through them, his arms around her, her weight on him feeling comfortable. and if his hands strayed a bit, say to her breast or navel or anywhere that he liked to touch her, she instantly slapped them off and concentrated on the screen, munching her way through mounds of popcorn as things got rough or tense in the story. when she was nervous, she had to eat. her mouth was always salty after a film.

nikhil remembered the first time he’d seen her. sharp black suit, smooth straight dark brown hair, ivory skin, red lipstick, grey (or was it green) eyes… and of course long pointed heels. slim and slightly, no markedly, haughty. she’d come to the police station to report a stolen blackberry. he was there on some work, she’d thought he was the officer on duty and demanded her f.i.r. be noted down. he’d smiled laconically at her peremptory tone and left the room. another overpaid, pampered expat, he’d thought. he was right about the expat, possibly even the overpaid. maya was a banker, currently in mergers and acquisitions, and had moved from india about a month ago with a huge bank.

he’d seen her next on the road looking completely hassled, holding a tiny dog by its leash. she was in track suit and fancy runners, hair knotted up. she had looked vulnerable. he had walked up and asked if everything was alright. she had recognised him an instant later, and glared.

she looked gorgeous when she was angry.

she had found the dog wandering about on the road and was determined to find the owner. she hadn’t cared she was getting late for work, twisty had to be taken home. twisty? he’d been confounded.

who was that?

she’d given the little mutt a name for the time being, she’d said. and looking at the furry creature scampering along after her he’d felt the dog liked the name. they’d found the owner, twisty had escaped slipping under the gate of their semi-detached house. her name was cottontail.

maya had hissed darkly under her breath later, “who names a dog after a rabbit! twisty is much better! huh!”

that’s when he’d felt he had to get to know her. in fact, he recalled, he’d wanted to bend down and kiss her. she had looked so terribly offended by that name. was there indeed a rabbit called cottontail?

she had agreed to have a coffee with him at the coffee bean nearby. they’d been there for a very long time. she had asked for tea and hadn’t liked it at all. no one in singapore knew what darjeeling tea was, she had declared with a toss of her head. he had wanted to laugh and hold her hand.

trained to notice a zillion things at once, he’d taken note of the fact that this was most unnatural. he was hardly the sort of man who thought of holding hands with a woman. at thirty two, having spent almost ten years as an investigator in narcotics and seeing the seamy side of life, the ugliness, the sheer violence in it… its gritty, real, malevolent feel never too far from him, he had almost entirely lost the space for women in his life. yes, once in a way he met someone, there was a bit of flirting, a couple of nights together… the usual thing. then it was over. he couldn’t even recall when it was that he’d been with anyone last. his mother fretted that he’d remain a bachelor, he let her be. he knew in his sort of life, some things were simply not viable: permanence, family, commitments that required you to be around, save money… stay alive.

and yet, he hadn’t stopped himself from sitting with her and talking. he was not fond of talking. turned out, she was. she approved of the carrot cake and the all day breakfast. later she conceded while the tea was not what it should be, the caramel ice blended was delicious. she told him she had been working for nearly four years now and had studied physics in college, then management. he had tried to keep a straight face, he found management and its schools, well, phoney. his friends in the corporate world said he was biased. he was possibly.

she blurted out between sips of caramel ice blended, “my parents divorced when i was ten… ma struggled… ” she paused for a second as if looking for words, trying to curb emotion, “anyway, now it’s all fine. i am working, my sister graduates in a couple of years… so!” and she smiled cheerily. he had found it hard not to let his feelings show… not pampered. he had not been right.

they had dinner together the next evening, and when he went to drop her home, she asked him if he’d like to come up. he hadn’t been able to hold back any longer. he’d leaned over and kissed her then.

her lips had a gentleness that made him linger, her hand landed on his cheek with a light fluttering touch. he had felt an insane desire to get out of the car, go around to her side and carry her upstairs.

he had gone up with her that night… they had both seemed a bit awkward as the apartment door closed, as if they knew this was some kind of routine adhered to as and when needed. when she’d broken off a kiss and said in a husky whisper, “i’ll be right back,” he had almost winced.

he had stopped her and said, he had to leave, there was work at the docks, and walked away.

nikhil got up from the chair, put a bunch of files and the revolver away in the safe in an adjoining room at the back. he switched off the lights and strode out of his office. he was already late. maya would be waiting.

he had to go away for almost two weeks after that night in her apartment. when he returned, the first phone call he made was to maya. that night at her apartment, they did not stop or wonder. nor could they wait. she had giggled later and said, “good, i went and splurged on a persian rug with my first salary…”

he could still feel her rubbing her cheek on his chest and doodling on his stomach. her voice had so many notes and cadences. he had wanted to badly know if there was anybody else in her life. so young and beautiful, surely, he couldn’t be the only one. then he had said to himself… it didn’t matter, as long as she was there with him when they could be together.

that was six months ago. there hadn’t been anyone else. he had sensed they were getting involved beyond a point… he missed her like hell when he was away. and so it had been important to make it clear to her that this was as far as he could take any relationship. no place in his life for anything more. in fact, she ought to really start looking around, maybe there was a handsome corporate type somewhere, closer to her age, with whom she could, you know-

maya had stuffed an egg tart in his mouth and said, “yeah, no need to tell me, ah pek, i have already started looking for someone i can book an hdb with.”

standing joke between them. she always marveled at how all her singaporean colleagues talked about an hdb flat when they got serious about their boyfriends. he’d explained to her the practice here of young couples applying for subsidized government housing, those hdb flats, way before their wedding because it took a fairly long while, even years, to actually get one. therefore, that became a major part of the plans regarding nuptials.

peals of laughter had followed, “at least, it’s better than, have your parents got the dowry my parents want for the wedding?” she had chortled. he had heard a funny desperation in her voice. she’d said later, her father had married a couple of years after deserting her mother with two young children, the grapevine had reported he’d been given an apartment and cash worth $20,000 in dowry.

he had lain next to her wide awake that night, disturbed, distressed. she called him old man… uncle, ah pek, at times, especially when she wanted him to shut up.

his mother had liked maya the moment she’d met her. “indian!” she had beamed. she had visited him unexpectedly that day and when she saw his guest she had instantly fired a salvo of questions. it included, where were you born? how many brothers and sisters do you have? when is your birthday? are you married? what is your caste?

nikhil had taken his mother by the shoulder at that and swiftly turned her around. he’d propelled her to the kitchen and said he was very hungry, would she make him one of her magic omelettes. he could see maya pursing her lips in the sitting room, trying not to laugh. how her eyes glittered.

maya.

he swallowed hard. his adam’s apple moved up, then settled back. he hadn’t even shaved, he thought again. he was late. no time. and hell, no gift. he turned on the radio, looked like there had been an accident somewhere, the traffic was thick and slow along orchard.

he’d called her before leaving, “baby, i don’t know when i’ll be back, i’ll try to make it to your birthday party, but…”

“don’t worry, catch those baddies, okay? and i’ll catch a young corporate sort, you know…?” she was trying to sound cool.

“i… ” he’d searched for his thoughts, what had he he wanted to say? “see you soon, sweetheart…” he’d wanted to tell her he’d throttle the young corporate type.

maya… didn’t it mean illusion? wasn’t it intoxication? perhaps it was contraband.

perhaps he should stay away.

he pressed his foot down on the accelerator. the traffic had begun to ease. at the posh condominium she lived in, the guard as usual made him wait at the gate. not the right kind of car… a rugged toyota suv, it deserved that slow walk over by the younger watchman, the peering in, the ascertaining that he had the right unit number. he wished he’d carried his revolver.

nikhil parked the car in the visitors lot and started walking toward the elevator.

he realised he was in fact running…

the elevator doors opened, a whole posse of human beings poured out. obviously they were together, coming from some sort of party, the girls in the tiniest skirts, the guys with gelled hair and that evening look.

was he that late? was the party already over? he rushed into the elevator and hit 13. why couldn’t she live on a lower floor… closer? why couldn’t she live…

he noticed the silence as he stepped out of lift. was he on the right floor? he reached up to ring the doorbell, a little apprehensive.

the door opened seconds later. maya stood before him.

her eyes… that’s what he always noticed first. they were dazzlingly silver grey tonight. she was smiling, the widest smile he’d ever seen he thought. no red lipstick. she wore a long flowing thing in shades of green. he had no idea what it was called but it swirled and floated about her, almost telling him to…

he reached out and pulled her into his arms and started kissing her.

there was no time for niceties and small talk. he wasn’t good at such things anyway. and as for her guests, well, he really didn’t care.

he had to feel her against him, hold her, she’d wiggle, she’d hold his face in her palms, she’d at one point start kissing him back with more force, she’d move her head, bite his lips, take charge of the kiss, stroke the back of his neck, grab a handful of his hair and moan… he wanted all of that right now. it had been so long.

he felt her hand move down over his chest under his jacket, fluttering gentle fingers, they were at his waist… she was beginning to undo his belt.

nikhil went still.

what was maya doing? he noticed they were inside her apartment… he hadn’t even felt they’d come in… and where were the others?

he lifted his head and caught hold of her hand.

“didn’t you say you were having a birthday party?” he knew that was not what you said to her when you met her after a week and that too on her birthday.

“i had it… last night…” she replied looking at him solemnly. he could feel laughter behind her voice, her eyes. what was going on? why…?

“whaaat!” nikhil was aghast, “it was your birthday yesterday?!” how could it be, he was sure she had said friday, and today was fri…

“well, it started last night, 12 midnight…” she was grinning now, enjoying his confusion.

nikhil shook his head and frowned, what was this game? he was beginning to feel disoriented. contraband, the thought went through his head again. illusion.

maya stepped forward and put her arms around him, “you don’t like parties, do you? so i had mine last evening… just wanted to hang with you today… won’t you wish me, nikhil?”

nikhil. the way she said his name right at the end, setting it a little apart from everything else she’d said, a note in it that made it much more than a name, six simple letters, two syllables. like she owned them, she made them come alive.

nikhil blinked. not from borneo, it was all already here, in singapore…

maya leaned back and stuck her right hand out. “my gift?” she asked, left eyebrow arched, a little haughtiness about her.

nikhil felt something hit his solar plexus. he did have a gift for her, but would she like it? hell, he had no idea what she liked.

he caught hold of her hand and got ready to say it in a light, funny vein…

but he found himself drawing away, and looking straight into her eyes he said, solemnly, no laughter anywhere, “i may never make more money than you, i will not be around very often, for days… even months, i can’t promise much, not even that i’ll stay alive, i know i am much older than you, and you know… what the heck, maya…” suddenly his voice rose, a strain of frustration, ire… desperation, “can’t you guess what i am trying to say… will you have me…” he had no idea but his eyes had gone deep velvet brown, “maya, will you marry me?”

he was gripping her hand so tightly, her fingertips had gone crimson red. she lifted her other hand and stroked his unshaven cheek, she made a little face as her fingers touched his scruffy beard, then she let her hand roam over to his forehead and traced the line of his sharp pronounced widow’s peak. her face was raised, he could see her lips glistening, a strange concentration in her eyes.

he realised he was barely breathing.

there are some moments in our lives that get etched in the mind, the heart, perhaps even the skin, forever.

suddenly she broke into a nutty grin and said, “stoopid!”

 

 

indrani’s index

 

i wrote this story with two actors in mind, barun sobti and sanaya irani. i can almost see them being nikhil and maya. i know these two actors are potent together, in fact they are unforgettable. i would like to thank my friend jessica for her help with the “ah pek” and the hdb details. ah pek is hokkien for uncle… often refers to men over fifty, a stereotype there of an older person who hangs about doing nothing much, slightly negative in connotation, yet said right with a little lightness, can say other things. “kelong” is a malay word meaning an offshore platform which is usually made of wood, it’s mainly used for fishing. i hope you enjoyed the love story set in singapore; the interpol building, new and blue and white and rather prominent is close to my place, i decided nikhil works there, wondering which condo is it where maya lives. do leave a comment, i look forward to your thoughts. hope the romance was happy, silly, good. thanks for reading.

 

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38 Comments

  • popliarchana@hotmail.com'
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    Archana popli
    September 20, 2015 at 12:25 am

    I love the way you use words to convey emotion ,and your visualizing skills are very good thanks for sending me a note mi loved it ,I like all your stories ,

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 20, 2015 at 12:45 am

      hi archana,
      thanks so much for coming over and reading. i really appreciate this… thanks for enjoying my stories. i hope they always strike a chord. i do hope to write more and find the right words. see you.

  • rmforrm@gmail.com'
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    ritu
    September 20, 2015 at 2:41 am

    I was on the third line of the Gift when I realised how much I had missed reading your Arshi stories In di. It was cool, funny, alive, passionate and all of love…the way it should be! Stoopid Nikhil was the gift , lol, and I enjoyed reading the tale from his pov. The Singapura touches were so cute. And your brand of story weaving…unbelievable as always!

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 20, 2015 at 2:49 am

      hi ritu,
      so happy you read and stoopided. i need to write some romance/s really… and all the time i see honey brown eyes and a funny cooky smile… also a lissome lovely girl. singapura is supposed to be highly not romantic despite all the honeymoon couples… but really it’s not too bad for a total pagal pyaar. glad you enjoyed. thanks again. ummm can that stew-pid n be my gift? hahahhaha.

  • javeria150893@gmail.com'
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    Javeria
    September 20, 2015 at 3:54 am

    very cute!!!
    His birthday gift was very unqiue and her action of having her birthday party at midnight was adorable, Nikhil and maya characters were adorable!!!
    Enjoy a lot reading this beautiful story.

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 20, 2015 at 8:46 am

      thank you… hi javeria, great to see you. you found them cute? aww, i had fun imagining them. you know i am so happy to see you and some of the others here. take care, see you.

  • Ranog2000@yahoo.com'
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    Ranogill
    September 20, 2015 at 6:37 am

    Really happy to see you back ..loved the one shot and I read it thinking about bs run and sanaya… Love to read more you got a unique style of writing …

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 20, 2015 at 8:42 am

      ranogill,
      thank you and i am so happy to see you here. i have missed meeting all of you over my stories. you imagined barun and sanaya as you read? lovely. thanks for that beautiful compliment. see you.

  • arshiland67@gmail.com'
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    arshi67
    September 20, 2015 at 5:13 pm

    Indi, this is such a beautifully nuanced story. With every sentence I read, I began to look forward to the next subtle bit of information you would give us about their relationship, about them as individuals. It was like slowly unwrapping a present, eager to get to it but loving the delicate wrapping on the way.

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      indrani robbins
      September 20, 2015 at 5:55 pm

      ruchi,
      i am smiling… when you put it like that, it just sounds so good. i was thinking to myself… really? it felt like that? thanks so so much and i am delighted you came to read. rhea, durga, and i hope to write original stuff for writersbrew and try and build a nice corner for contemplative, happy reading. glad you came. i really enjoy the way you write.

  • shruti_keswani2405@yahoo.in'
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    Shruti
    September 20, 2015 at 9:53 pm

    This was so simple yet so deep. The way you described Nikhil’s frustration, his inability to give due importance to work and Maya at the same time, his guilt for being unfair to Maya and his unconditional love towards her was beautiful.
    Often you find yourself in circumstances that demand your complete attention and sometimes beyond and it is exactly during such times that you wish you didn’t have to commit. You hope you have someone who could support you without any preambles and conditions. Maya is one such person for Nikhil.

    There was nothing incomprehensible in their lives yet everything seemed twisted. There’s nothing that really binds them and yet they are together.

    Beautifully written!

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 20, 2015 at 10:26 pm

      hi shruti,
      thank you for coming and reading. i am so happy to see you. i read your comment and felt really good, if the story conveyed those things, i am thrilled. relationships are always a little hard to figure out, understand exactly why… yet, people connect. i find that fascinating… i guess that’s why romance attracts me.. always a mystery in it. yeah, “There’s nothing that really binds them and yet they are together.” thanks for reading and your thoughts.

  • shUbhangi.k.16@gmail.com'
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    Shubhangi
    September 21, 2015 at 11:30 am

    This is a wonderful piece. So simple but conveying everything. Enjoyed reading

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 21, 2015 at 4:16 pm

      hi shubhangi,
      thank you. glad the link worked. delighted you enjoyed. see you.

  • Reply
    rhea sinha
    September 21, 2015 at 1:23 pm

    Delightfully sweet.. I think we like exactly the same kind of heroes. Barun Sanaya would be good in this. I actually thought at the beginning from his thoughts that he is thinking for a gift for his wife. But it was that familiarity of thought.. She is already a part of him.

    My favourite portion was the paragraph describing his Interpol office. A nice touch of humour there. Enjoyed reading this Indi di.

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 21, 2015 at 4:21 pm

      thanks, rhea. i think that huge interpol office egged me on to write this story. and you liked the office, me thrilled. that revolver lying near the table lank had me totally rattled and excited. thanks for feeling that familiarity, i didn’t consciously plan it to sound that way, but i knew he knew her well and they spent a lot of time together. relationships interest me… they are rarely what you think they should be and plans change all the time. makes them interesting, also the complete unpredictability of the human mind… you think you understand it all, but really, you never can. glad you read and liked it. fiction has something intoxicating about it too i now notice. i feel like writing a story all the time. crazy.

  • Anureddy1105@gmail.com'
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    Archana
    September 22, 2015 at 2:22 am

    This was such an awesome story, loved the OS Di!! Aww it was so cute, I could totally imagine Barun and Sanaya in the story. Need more stories from you Di, especially Arshi ones, miss your stories Di. Come back with a totally your style Arshi story hehehehe!!! Love you and miss you πŸ™‚

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      indrani robbins
      September 22, 2015 at 9:26 am

      hi anu,
      great to see you… actually i am totally touched to see my if readers here. you liked it? thank you thank you. yes, i must write some more. arshi too perhaps, but i really want to see barun and sanaya doing something else… but potent too… very. very. po.tent. ha, asr is smiling that cruel mean lopsided grin and saying, oh really? he thinks i am going to lose. oh my arrogant wonderful man.

  • indira213@gmail.com'
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    indira
    September 22, 2015 at 7:34 am

    Loved your style of writing indi as their story was unraveled in layers. Straight reminded the Bourne series with passionate interludes . The SG touch lah and hdb added lot of flavor. It was evident something intangible is on the way. But the way You “presented” it takes the cake. Great to hear you are ready to write more for these two. Tfs indi.

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 22, 2015 at 9:22 am

      indu, thank you so much for reading and i am so happy you enjoyed the story, it’s telling. i am not a “real” fiction writer as you know.. i just write, because i seem to love it. while creating a story, i look for little things that make it palpable for the reader and i now realise why writers often spend hours describing a scenery ha ha. gives context, gives dimension, makes real. ah, i have to say it’s been fun trying to understand the thing about fiction… all thanks to a man looking hot and acting hotter still. thanks for liking the singapore touches… i live hear, i feel the romance of this not known to be romantic land… i want to write with barun and also sanya in mind, but i hope asr won’t glare at me if i try a hero a bit diferent… let’s see. very nice of you to read. look forward always to your thought through and cogent opinion.

  • indira213@gmail.com'
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    indira
    September 22, 2015 at 8:45 pm

    Oh yeah it may make a farq to him if you give him a total pass.. but as luck would have it, his reflections can not be escaped.. as here… or your readers are used to follow/ chase his shadows in your writings always….

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 23, 2015 at 12:06 am

      hehhehehhe, i’ll get caught i bet. so hard to not think asr when i think hero.

  • anukap@gmail.com'
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    anu kapoor
    September 22, 2015 at 9:28 pm

    hi indi, thanks for your message and sorry for taking so long to read and comment.
    good to see you back with a short story, which was a lovely read…didn’t expect any less from you:) you got all the ingredients, including the suspense of the gift and I could well imagine barn and sanaya as the leads. liked singapore as the setting, could so relate to it. no, i don’t live there but have been there often and have dear friends of indian orginin who could easily be nikhil and maya. keep it coming indi and thanks for introducing us to this blog. will read the other posts too. cheers!

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 23, 2015 at 12:04 am

      hi anu,
      thank you so much for reading the story, and you’re not late at all. took a chance and wrote this one, hoping it would work. have been wanting to write something barun for a while. and barun sanaya is just such a daeadly combination. happy you enjoyed. so nikhil and maya feel right in singapore? so glad. please do look around. i hope you find something interesting to read. take care, see you.

  • ratidesh07@yahoo.com'
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    rati123
    September 22, 2015 at 10:12 pm

    I always love your writing ! You make the situations come alive. It is almost like watching it happen.

    Thanks.

    • Reply
      indrani robbins
      September 23, 2015 at 12:00 am

      rati, thanks so much for coming over. and thanks for saying that. thrilled you liked the story.

  • ramya.vc616@gmail.com'
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    Ramya
    September 22, 2015 at 11:49 pm

    Dear indi,name is Lee.Iamlee from IF.remember me? Great great Bday gift from you.mine was on12 Th Sep.thanks.miss your Arshi stories.You are right,Barun& Sanaya would have been perfect for this story.Backdrop is almost a key character in ur stories be it Lucknow,London or Singapore.Native La makes a debut here.Nikhil has unconditional love,yet unable to express his feelings,guilty about not giving enough time for his ladylove just like Arnav,yet so gentle.Maya on the other hand needs no assurance,not bothered about society,age,work,finance.She doesn’t even expects his gift,all she needs his love/ presence.so much like Khushi.sacrificial bordering on martyr .Overjoyed ,will re read it.thanks for inviting me to read it.Hope to see you see soon.BTW you are hot.tc.bye

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      indrani robbins
      September 23, 2015 at 12:14 am

      how can i forget you, ms lee… all our chats. love the fact you made time to drop in and that you found la in singapore… πŸ™‚ yeah, can’t go far without la. so you saw arnav and khushi here… haan. i guess they have that archetype element in them and we see and feel them beneath the layers of the physical outer self of people. do read again. i shall be honoured. thanks for liking my little notes on the place of action… i feel place is important, gives context, colour… i wonder if it impacts the type and texture of feelings we feel too… great to see you. hope you’ll look around and see if you find soemthing else to read here. take care.

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    Faiqa
    September 24, 2015 at 10:08 am

    Absolutely mesmerizing story indi… πŸ˜‰
    Description of scenery and backdrop imagery is adding another taste in it.of course Sarun always adds another touch regardless what character you bring, we see them in everyone.
    A touch of suspense was my fav…

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      indrani robbins
      September 24, 2015 at 10:37 am

      hi faiqa,

      you read? i am thrilled of course. thanks so much. suspense… i love the stuff. would love to write an out and out suspense thriller some day. great to see you.

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    yoga1237
    September 26, 2015 at 2:32 am

    Awesome………..

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      indrani robbins
      September 26, 2015 at 2:36 pm

      hi yoga,

      wonderful to see you. thanks… glad you liked.

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    Supriya
    October 1, 2015 at 1:26 am

    really nice one shot….enjoyed it πŸ™‚

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      indrani robbins
      October 4, 2015 at 3:34 am

      supriya,

      so good to see you… liked it? yay. thanks.

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    nissoo
    October 3, 2015 at 8:16 pm

    awesome update!

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      indrani robbins
      October 3, 2015 at 10:29 pm

      nissoo, lovely to see you. thanks so much. πŸ™‚

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    1chilly
    December 16, 2015 at 4:22 am

    Hi Indi! I was missing reading your Arshi stories. Opened an old PM and found the link to this blog. Just finished reading the Nikhil Maya story. He offered himself to Maya on her birthday. What a perfect gift! His Ma is the typical Indian mother. Loved the sequence where she meets Maya for the first time. It was a perfect story with a hint of humour, some thrills and romance.

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      indrani robbins
      December 19, 2015 at 1:39 pm

      hi 1chilly,

      great to see you. maya and nikhil were fun to think about and of course, singaporean or not, he has the indian mother… glad you enjoyed. i keep writing stuff on writersbrew along with a couple of other if friends… do drop in sometimes. wondering if you read my other short stories. nutmeg and mace is a romance sort of thing, jagged light and inheritance are part of a collection i’m writing very very very slowly. if you get the time, do read one, and tell me what you thought.. i appreciate your thoughts and would love to know. see you.

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